I felt like I was watching episodes of “Deadwood,” a
2004-2006 TV serial drama. That show pushed the limits, a decade ago, of
violence and depravity on cable TV. This
also had a 19th century setting, Dakota in 1876, 25 years after the
gold rush in California. Things weren’t
all that different from the lives of the Sisters brothers.
Our Gold Rush book had themes similar to the 1959 novel
“Lord of the Flies” about people left to their own devices, resorting to
violence as the solution to all problems.
The prose, however, of the Flies book was of a much
higher caliber than that of deWitt’s book.
deWitt really wallows in the pig sty with the
boy’s language and moral turpitude. In
Deadwood, they used to throw the bodies, sometimes not yet dead, into the hog
sty for a quick cleaning up; the brothers would have approved of this no-mess
burial.
The closest we ever get to any sort of tolerable
character in this novel is in the depictions of the ever-present prostitutes
with hearts of gold; unfortunately even their gold is money-lust and not
compassion.
This is deWitt’s claim to fame, I imagine,
that he was able to complete this story without ever introducing a single
character that wasn’t despicable and without saving grace. The author also met the challenge of keeping
the sub-plot lines simple, the thoughts and actions relentlessly kept at an
uneducated, childish level. The evil, sociopathic
older brother controls the dim-witted youngster through a dozen vignettes and
countless murders without either of them ever thinking beyond their next
murder, meal or brandy.
One could argue that
clumsy Eli is the mirror image counterfoil to evil Charlie. They both lust after whores, but Eli tips well
feigning chastity; Charlie’s gluttony is with brandy, but Eli
tries a temperance diet for a
day; greed drives their every move, but Eli
gives to charity a lot; sloth is natural to them both,
but Eli learns to have diligence
in brushing his teeth; wrath strikes Charlie uncontrollably, but
Eli has patience with Tub; Envy is Charlie’s burning
passion, but Eli gives kindness
to his whores; Pride dominates Charlie’s encounters with
other people, Eli often retreats into simple humility. Seven deadly Sins, seven heavenly virtues. They died, in any case, of ignorance.